The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities 2000
The bar chart illustrates the highest and the lowest
levels
of Dinitrous Oxide and Sulphur Dioxide daily in 4 cities
including Los
Angeles
, Calcutta
, Beijing, Mexico
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and Mexico
City
in 2000.
Overall
, Mexico
City
consumed much more of both gases than the other cities
. While
Mexico
City
and Los
Angeles
spent more N2O than SO2, SO2 became prevalent gas rather than N2O in Calcutta
and Beijing.
In terms of Los
Angeles
, the figure for the amount of SO2 ranged from 2 to 10 which was the lowest in
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of
4
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the 4
cities
. In contrast
, the presence of this
air in Mexico
City
varied from 80 to 200 which was the highest. Regarding levels
N2O
in Change preposition
of N2O
Los
Angeles
, it reached peak and bottom at 39 and 104 respectively which was the second rank, whereas
Mexico
City
still was the first rank in levels
of N2O fluctuating between 113 and 207.
In terms of Calcutta
, the maximum and minimum levels
of SO2 were 47 and 59 respectively, while
the figure in Beijing ranged from 25 to 100. On the other hand
, the presence for
N2O in these 2 Change preposition
of
cities
reached a peak at approximately the highest levels
, while
the lowest in Calcutta
was almost double that of Beijing.Submitted by lethanhson7a on
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