As a result of electronic invitations such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays a large number of
people
use
electronic invitations like a computer and so on. But some people
think so one negative side is that this
kind of technology
will be effected on their health. I definitely agree
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onagree
toagree
withagree
this
side. I will explain in my essay why I choose this
way.
In our rapidly changing world, technology
is very
important part of our life. Because in our daily Correct article usage
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people
use
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any type of Remove the article
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technology
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the phone or computer, one best side is that when Wrong verb form
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people
have a difficulties
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difficulties
a difficulty
such
as don't understand something .On top of that, developing technologies are creating new opportunities for us. for example
, we can learn useful things from our mobile phones, that is
, we can acquire worldly knowledge online, expand our thinking and discover new ideas, and thereby contribute to the development of the country.
On the other hand
,it can be noted that technology
is not only an important part of our life but also
creates some problems. for example
, as a result
of young people
's improper use
of mobile communication devices and computers, negative problems are arising in our society. In addition
, I should mention that excessive use
of various technologies causes people
to get some diseases. especially people
are harmed by technologies used without physical movement.In my opinion
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this
situation should not be ignored. because the use
of social networks or technology
without much physical activity naturally leads to lack
of communication and several diseases in humans.
In a nutshell, as I mentioned above, if we Correct article usage
a lack
use
technology
in large quantities, people
will lose interest in the natural environment and become laziness and many other consequencesSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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