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some people believe that isa good idea to express their points of views and ideas through social media while , other belive opposite . Who do you support or why ?

#people #isa #idea #points #media #belive #support
In
this
 contemporary ,era social
media
 and social networks are the best tools to express feelings and stand. Some people are extroverts who can share each moment of their personal and professional
life
 on social
media
 we called them bloggers.
Whereas
 others are too shy to post anything or share their idea. I believe that until your view or content is not objectionable to society ,
this
 tool remarkably helps all. To commence with , there is a proliferation of internet users and social news subscribers throughout the world. the nation uses social news for various conveniences. People who are very vocal and open up to the world express every single thought on social networking sites.
For instance
, social publishing is the bread roll for the
media
 creator , as they just live on
this
 by expressing their personal and professional
life
.
Moreover
, sometimes their contents provoke a faction of people on certain issues.
hence
, there is a caveat to some extent.
However
, some content is logical and gives a certain amount of entertainment wisely acceptable by the population and gives popularity to creators.
This
 tool is really a boon to those who are introverted or shy to express their feelings or thoughts in public which can be termed as "freedom of speech ".
Moreover
 , some communities believe that opening up about your personal
life
 and daily activities on social
media
 is not a sensible thought, which breaks privacy and confidentiality in a person's
life
.
To conclude
 , everything in limit is blooming and glistening to the world .society can not accept objectional or jeopardize things.
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