Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many
government
believe that economic Change to a plural noun
governments
progress
is their most important goal, but some people don’t think so. They said that other types of progress
were equally important for a country
. In this
essay, I will discuss both views and giving
my own opinion.
On the one hand, economic Change the form of the verb
give
progress
help to enrich the country
where we live. For example
, if we have more opportunity
to improve Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
the
technologyCorrect article usage
apply
,
or machines, we can have more Remove the comma
apply
chance
to stand near Western Fix the agreement mistake
chances
country
, so it will be the best solution to help that. Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Secondly
, when we are larger in the economic
, our money will be more Replace the word
economy
value
. The higher value, the more comfortable we can get. Replace the word
valuable
Besides
, economic progress
also
help
to attract the other Change the verb form
helps
country
. It will be a huge benefit to go farther
when we can meet and work with more experts in the world. Correct your spelling
further
For instance
, David Beckham bought our new car 4 years ago which help our country
connected
to Wrong verb form
connect
foreigner
and be more famous.
Fix the agreement mistake
foreigners
On the other hand
, the others are equally important. For example
, we can’t do that without graduation. The more genius we made, the more achivement
we can get. Even though, food and drinks are Correct your spelling
achievement
achievements
also
necessary. It’s one of the most things that they need, so we can make them satisfied just by the food or drinks. One of the most
things Correct quantifier usage
apply
thathave
Correct your spelling
that have
most
Correct article usage
the most
of
Change preposition
apply
attention
from Add an article
the attention
Add an article
a foreigner
foreigner
is the level of pollution. You can’t eat in the dirty space and they do so. Because of that, Fix the agreement mistake
foreigners
take
care more about Wrong verb form
taking
the
washing and cleaning will be the best choice. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, they won’t stay here for too long if we don’t have the
attractive location.
Correct article usage
an
To conclude
, economic progress
is important but others
Correct quantifier usage
other
progress
is equally too. I hope that Correct article usage
the goverment
goverment
will take care more Correct your spelling
government
about
them to improve our Change preposition
of
country
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