The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates how much materials were recycled during a
28 years. It can be concluded from it that Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
a
value of recycling for all four materials increased.
Correct article usage
the
Firstly
, the most significant increase is a
aluminium cans recycling. It was above 10 per cent in 1986 and it grew consistently year after year, and become to 45% in 2010. Per cent of aluminium recycling almost doubled between 2002 and 2010. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
to this
, glass containers reuse increased by 10% over this
period. It dropped from 1982 to 1990, but in 1994 it become the same as in 1982 and it continued
rise until 2010.
Add the particle
tocontinued
Secondly
, a
recycling rate for other materials grew too but not so much. Plastics were recycled Correct article usage
the
less
Change preposition
by less
then
5% in 1990, Replace the word
than
furthermore
, there were not recycled before this
year at all. In 2010 the rate of it increased to 8%. Paper and cardboard were reused at 65% in 1982 and 1990, then
there was a dramatic growth to 80%, but from 1994 to 2010 it dropped steadily to 70%.Submitted by natashaklik on
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