The diagram shows the components of a neuron and how it works Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The lecturer discusses

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the main

feactures

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features

neuron

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, and he divides

neuron

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into seven parts to report.

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served.

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cell

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, one of the most important pieces in a

neuron

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neuron

, and it is responsible for soma. Dendrites, which the

cell

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in, can receive messages from other cells. When dendrites obtain the message.

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and terminal buttons, is able to pass messages away from other

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to other neurons, muscles, or glands. Beneath the

axon

, there has some electrical signal

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down

axon

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Furthermore

Myelin

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sheath that covers the

axon

helps speed neural impulses.

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, terminal buttons are able to link or connect

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, in order to pass the electrical signal. Terminal

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's dendrites. Because neurons connect with each other, the

controling

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controlling

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messages are able to pass through these neurons.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

158 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

neuron
nervous system
dendrites
soma
cell body
nucleus
axon
electrical impulses
myelin sheath
axon terminals
neurotransmitters
synapse
signal transmission
insulating
unmyelinated fibers

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