Some people think that children should follow their parents’ advice, however, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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advice but some
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. Both
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statements
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think that
children
can
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consult
with parents for advice.
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the
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their
children
because they are smaller and don't
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anything.The
children
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their parents.
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people
in the world can understand their
children
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life.But seeing
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