The best way to solve the world 's environment problem is to increase the price of fossil fuel . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable true that

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the consumption of fossil

fuels

is increasing at an alarming

rate

for a few decades.

Thus

,it is believed by experts that rising the

rate

of fossil

fuels

is a good source for reducing environmental pollution. I agree with

this

phenomenon

due to

some reasons,which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with,the first and foremost reason is,if government increase the

rate

of fossil

fuels

like petrol and diesel,

people

will reduce the usage of private vehicles, which will be helpful for the environment to escape from harmful layers.

Secondly

,

people

will give

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first preference to using a bicycle and walking when they need to go to outside places,which will not only be helpful for them to maintain their health but

also

it will be beneficial for the environment to be safe.

For example

,it is noticed by the BBC(British breaking news )that most

people

prefer to use a bicycle for reaching their destination.

Hence

,it will give a chance to take part in reducing the usage of fossil

fuels

. Despite

this

, it has some drawbacks to increasing renewable sources.

Firstly

, nowadays having a private vehicle is very beneficial for every person because in

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emergency cases,they can easily reach their destination on time .

For instance

, when

people

suffer from harmful diseases,their parents can admit their patients to hospitals and can give better treatment,so that they can save their life. If authority will increase the

rate

of it ,

people

will face many challenges in their life.

Moreover

, it helps them in

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weather conditions

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when they have a requirement to reach their work,they can easily take it without

forwaiting

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for waiting

waiting

any public transportation and it saves

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time. In conclusion,

although

helpful in emergency cases and in weather conditions are more pivotal,the benefits for the environment and keeping physically fit are more considerable.