the graph below show the number of drivers in Britain who have been caught driving too fast by speed cameras placed on roads, and the number of people killed in road accidents, over an eight_year priod since the introduction of speed cameras. the tables show the results of a survey on people's opinions on speed cameras.

The presented graphs depict the

number

of drivers in the UK

were

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who were

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caught by speed

cameras

which

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placed on roads, and the

number

of people who

killed

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were killed

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in

road

accidents

, during

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the eight_year

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eight_year

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eight-year

period since the speed

cameras

lunched

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.

Moreover

, the tables illustrate people’s

point

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of view on speed

cameras

. The first graph shows that 200,000 drivers were caught speeding in the first year and

also

this

amount

have

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rose

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slightly to 1,600,000 drivers in 8

years

which means speed

cameras

do

no

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not

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seem really useful over an eight _year period in reducing of disobey of rules. The second graph

demonstrate

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the

steadily

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amount of

road

accidents

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accident

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fatalities during the

years

.

Furthermore

, in the first year,

accidents

have been 3,000 but it

has

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fluctuation line between 3,000 and 3,500 in the following eight

years

.

In addition

, tables show the results of a survey on people’s opinions on speed

cameras

.

While

,

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most

of

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the

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people

are

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agree that speed

cameras

do not play the

roll

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role

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and

they

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are worthless in reducing the

number

of

accidents

.

However

, they think that the main reason for the installation of speed

cameras

is to raise revenue which

achive

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achieves

71

percent

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per cent

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and another view

that is

applied to improve

road

safety with less than 30

ratio

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ratios

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.

Besides

, they believe that the

number

of

cameras

on the

road

is too many and

have

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more than a half percentage

also

a few people say that the speed

cameras

are too few and about

right

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the right

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number

on the roads.

Overall

, both graphs and tables are shown that

although

the

number

of speed

cameras

increased

during

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over

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the

years

but

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it doesn’t have a useful impact

in

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on

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road

accidents

as well,

this

huge

number

of existing

cameras

are

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meaningless.