Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Nowadays, there are a lot of laboratory
animals
in chemical or medicine companies, we do not know their population
also
we ignore them, but some people remember that these
animals
are part of nature
however
they have emotions.
Therefore
we should do something about them for less
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in experimentation.
Firstly
, the
animals
are alive, they are not
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of
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for us,
also
, all
part
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of nature
have
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feeling
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and
emotion
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emotions
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. Because of that, we should not do everything
what
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we want
to
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them. We should respect
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their life,
however
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life is a cycle in all
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of
creature
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.
Additionally
, we have started to damage live life on the earth,
thus
, we should find another better way
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experimentation
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on
animals
.
On the other hand
,
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development need live
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,
therefore
, sometimes
the
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experiments are the most important thing for
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a disease.
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, there was an experiment on
animals
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find a vaccine throughout
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.
In particular
, these
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of
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may do with
animals
without
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. In conclusion, all of humanity
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development for medicine and unfortunately, we need some experimentation on
animals
. But, we must remember that the
animals
are alive and we should not need any growth in chemical
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for fashion industries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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