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Some people believe unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes( for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Certain individuals think
community
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 services should be free and mandatory part of secondary
school
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 courses
such
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 as working for a charity, developing the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger ones. I strongly agree as
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 will help them gain knowledge in different aspects and instil good motive of rendering
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.
To begin
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,
students
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 should be given the opportunity to learn how to be of help to
people
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 around them as
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 will improve their knowledge and ability to do different types of work that can benefit their society.
Also
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,
this
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 can be done by the
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 administrators by creating a time in the student's timetable for assisting their neighbours in things that will improve their environment to be conducive for living and working for charities will be helpful in enhancing their skills.
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,
according to
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 a research study by Williams James states that 86% of
students
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 in the USA are able to know more about their society in ways they can be of help and develop their skills with the subject called '
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service
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 ' that was made compulsory in their studies.
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, another reason for learning
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service
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 in
school
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 as a course is to build the interests of
students
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 as they grow to assist
people
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 without expecting anything in return or money.
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, there will be a great improvement in the world as
people
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 learn how they can help their communities and the effects it will have on the
people
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 in building good interpersonal relationships making all countries live in peace and harmony.
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, the educational board in Nigeria has been able to help in the development of the country by making
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service
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 a compulsory course for
students
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 in secondary
school
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. In conclusion,
students
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 in secondary schools should be allowed to learn about free
community
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service
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 as
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 will develop their knowledge and skills and
also
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 make them have an interest in assisting
people
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 in their society.
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