The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the recycling process for
plastic
bottles.
There are various types of elastic products in our daily life, like water bottles, food wraps, Use synonyms
plastic
bags, etc. Putting these into the rubbish car is the first step of the process.
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Secondly
, the recycling van will bring the Linking Words
plastic
waste to the recycling centre which is responsible for sorting by workers. Use synonyms
Next,
the elastic materials will be compressed into blocks like a massive cube and be crushed by two strong and dynamic machines, after that these craps fall into a sink where full of water, Linking Words
this
stage is called washing.
The next stage is producing Linking Words
plastic
pellets, they through a large tube and be heated into raw materials which will become the original materials for manufacturing new productions, Use synonyms
for example
: meal boxes,clothes, gift packages, pencils and so on. Linking Words
This
is the Linking Words
last
step of the recycling circle.
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this
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plastic
stuff will be tossed in the bin and start new recycling when its useful life is finished.Use synonyms
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