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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic wolrd. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these viese views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued by some that sharing as much
information
 as possible in the fields like inventing , firms and in classrooms are good
whereas
, others believe that some
information
 is important
as well as
 valuable to be shared . In the upcoming ,paragraph I will discuss both views and give my opinion. There are many benefits of sharing viewpoints in any field as it enhances the
knowledge
 of the person. If we share
knowledge
 regarding scientific research it will help to grow our minds.
For example
,
one
 of my friends has vast
knowledge
 regarding the business
as well as
 new inventions by sharing
such
 type of
knowledge
 he enhances his
knowledge
as well as
 awareness of the new invention and new firms. Another benefit is that it
also
 helps
one
 to gain interest in
such
 fields, By gaining
knowledge
one
 can open his own firm and grow in the world.
However
, some
knowledge
 is very confidential in any scientific research. If someone shares the
knowledge
 it can hamper the community of that place.
For instance
, if
one
 of the inventions is get disclosed others can easily copy and make it as if they have invented the product or the particular thing. So it is important to find some kind of material which is confidential.
Moreover
, we can discuss some sort of
information
 but not confidential ones because some
knowledge
 can help people to grow and
also
 help them to earn money. Nowadays, more people are making money by providing
information
 on Youtube
due to
 which they are earning money as well.
To conclude
, it is important to share
information
 but some sort of
information
 is confidential and it will hamper people. In my ,opinion sharing
information
 is the key to success.
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