The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
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in a certain country, from 2011 to 2018. It can be clearly seen that the Use synonyms
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number
openings
fluctuated over the given time period.
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closing their doors increased dramatically, reaching 5, 100. The statistics remained steady, for the given time period.
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decreased significantly, from 2011 (roughly 8500) to 2012 (merely under 4, 000) the contrary returned by roughly 50% by 2014, the following year the Use synonyms
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openings
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remained steady for the next two years. Add the comma(s)
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, after a few fluctuations, in 2018 the figures for new Linking Words
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openings
saw a Use synonyms
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fall to 3, 000 Linking Words
openings
, and Use synonyms
this
is the lowest figure observed in seven years.
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amount
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