The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The given line graph illustrates two types of
marketsclosing
and Correct your spelling
markets closing
market closing
openings
of new markets
in a certain country, from 2011 to 2018. It can be clearly seen that the amount
of closings and the Change the quantifier
number
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
openings
fluctuated over the given time period.
To begin
, in 2011 roughly 6400 markets
closed. The figures for closing fluctuated over the next four years until 2015, and there was a dramatic fall in closing to approximately 700 markets
. The next year, the figures of
Change preposition
for
markets
closing their doors increased dramatically, reaching 5, 100. The statistics remained steady, for the given time period.
When it comes to new markets
openings
decreased significantly, from 2011 (roughly 8500) to 2012 (merely under 4, 000) the contrary returned by roughly 50% by 2014, the following year the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
openings
fell down from 2014 to 6, 000) to 2015 (4, 000), on the
contrary
remained steady for the next two years. Add the comma(s)
,contrary
Lastly
, after a few fluctuations, in 2018 the figures for new markets
Change the noun form
market
openings
saw a further
fall to 3, 000 openings
, and this
is the lowest figure observed in seven years.
In sum, the most noticeable in the graph is that the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
markets
closing and the amount
for
new Change preposition
of
markets
Change the noun form
market
openings
recorded a similar trend and also
a fluctuating trend over the given time period.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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