The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced

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The process diagram explains how milk and buttermilk products are produced.
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, there are 8 stages in the process of milking production starting from cow-eating grasses to the product being taken to the supermarkets for sale. First of all, the first few steps are carried out on the farm. The cow goes out to eat grasses the cows are reared on the farm every day before the extraction from them is done twice daily with the use of the milking machine. The extracted buttermilk is stored in the refrigerator to prevent spoiling and it is transported to the factory with the use of a milk tanker every day.
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, steps taken in the factor is that extraction is pasteurized and made into a different product example : full cream is packed inside a can or bottle, and the extract can be used to produce other products like cheese, butter, yoghurt etc. The cream products are being transferred to stores and supermarkets for sale.
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