The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarise and report the information.

The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured

Summarise and report the information.
The diagram illustrates the manufacture of instant
noodles
.
Overall
, the process of instant
noodles
production consists of 8 stages: storage, mixing, doughing, cooking and Fulfilment are the main stages.
Firstly
, the process of manufacturing starts with storing the flour in storage silos.
Then
, mix the flour with water and oil to form the dough. After that the paste pass between rollers through the dough sheets and
then
to the dough strips. To form the disc shape, the strips are formed with a machine to form
noodles
discs. At
this
stage, cooking and drying is the process through which it will become nearly the same product as we buy. In
this
,stage the
noodles
discs are cooked in deep oil and
then
dried. And now it is time for Fulfillment.
Further
,The product was filled in cups with vegetables and spices added.
Lastly
, Labelling and sealing stage, through which the filled cups are labelled and sealed to become branded instant
noodles
.
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