The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarise and report the information.

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The diagram illustrates the manufacture of instant

noodles

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, the process of instant

noodles

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production consists of 8 stages: storage, mixing, doughing, cooking and Fulfilment are the main stages.

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, the process of manufacturing starts with storing the flour in storage silos.

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, mix the flour with water and oil to form the dough. After that the paste pass between rollers through the dough sheets and

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to the dough strips. To form the disc shape, the strips are formed with a machine to form

noodles

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discs. At

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stage, cooking and drying is the process through which it will become nearly the same product as we buy. In

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,stage the

noodles

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discs are cooked in deep oil and

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dried. And now it is time for Fulfillment.

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,The product was filled in cups with vegetables and spices added.

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, Labelling and sealing stage, through which the filled cups are labelled and sealed to become branded instant

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

158 words

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