the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given line graph demonstrates the amounts of
waste
production
by companies from 2000 to 2015. Overall
, the waste
production
of Company
A and Company
B moderately decreased over time whereas
Company
C represents upward
trend over Correct article usage
an upward
period
of 15 years.
In 2000, Add an article
a period
the period
Company
A started at 12 tonness
of Correct your spelling
tonnes
waste
production
, then
declined just over the 9 tonness
in 2010, and finished at well under the 9 Correct your spelling
tonnes
tones
tonness
after 5 years. From 2000 to 2005, Correct your spelling
tonnes
tonne
Company
B's waste
production
slightly increased, and It declined dramatically to approximately 3 tonness
between 2005 and 2015, before It reached a peak at over 10 Correct your spelling
tonnes
tonness
in 2005.
Correct your spelling
tonnes
In contrast
, Company
C rapidly inclined to roughly 6 tonness
of Correct your spelling
tonnes
waste
a year in 2005. Then
, steadily rose between 2005 and 2010. From 2010 to 2015, the production
of waste
of Company
C increased by 4 tonness
and reached a peak point in 2015.Correct your spelling
tonnes
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