The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport.

The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport.
The
three
charts illustrate the percentage of
three
categories, namely carbohydrates, protein, and fat in
three
different diets.
Overall
,
it is clear that
carbohydrates account for a majority of a healthy
diet
for
sport
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and a healthy
diet
. Meanwhile, protein has the highest proportion in the average
diet
compared with other diets. It can be seen clearly that Carbohydrates make up a 60% healthy
diet
for
sport
.
This
proportion is lower
10
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% in the healthy
diet
and 20% in the average
diet
.
Otherwise
, people who follow the average
diet
consume the highest protein at 40%, compared with the healthy
diet
and healthy
diet
for
sport
, 30% for the former and 25% for the
later
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. Fat consists of a small fraction
in
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total
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nutrition for those who are following
three
ways of
diet
. The percentage of fat in a healthy
diet
for
sport
is the lowest a fifth
while
other
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two need higher fat by 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, diet, sport with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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