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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic wolrd. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these viese views and give your own opinion.

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It is thought by some, sharing
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 about the business, scientific research or the academic world can be really beneficial,
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 other people say that it is totally secret
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 and dissemination of
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data
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 can be really dangerous.
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, I will give detailed
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 about how shared
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 about science can influence our society in a positive way, and
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, harmful results which come through the accessibility of
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information
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. On the one hand,
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 a crucial role in all cases of science or any other fields and
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 truth is
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 linked to the life of the community. If people are aware of some
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 about scientific research or business, they can get a really beneficial income from that
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 as investing their money in the business sector, so they can get really high money from that in a certain time period.
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, students can build their own educational background by getting
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 about the academic world
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 as which university is the best for a master's degree,
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 they can choose one university from tons of options.
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, the result of the survey of Times Square revealed that approximately 80% of the total students chose their educational line with the help of
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 shared by the government.
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, easy accessibility of
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information
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 can lead to harmful results for society. If government share all the
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 about any field,
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 can lead to confusion within the population of the country
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 as whether
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 is true or false.
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, some
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 are really secret and accessibility of
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information
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 can be really harmful to the economy or education of certain countries
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 because other countries would try to achieve and use
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information
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 in order to improve their income.
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,
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 a report revealed by Google Company in 2018, some valuable
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 about encryption was stolen by foreign companies and used against them in order to decrease the company's profit. To summarize, in my opinion, some
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 is crucial and
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 valuable,
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this
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data
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 should not be shared freely, because even tiny
information
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 can play an important role in improving certain sectors.
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