You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.

Dear Mr Jaloliddinov, I am very happy to send my congratulation. Because I have learned a lot of receipts from your cookery course.

Firstly

,

Before

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apply

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I had

not

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tonot

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know

cakes

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about cakes

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,

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after I learned very delicious things.

Such

as

,

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cakes

, foods, salats and others. Especially, I have cooked all of

things

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the things

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for my husband's birthday. Everybody

were

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happy

from

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with

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me.

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, my

mother in-law

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mother-in-law

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.

Secondly

, If I tell

truth

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the truth

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, the course is given income to our family. Because several people are booking

cakes

for holidays, parties and others.

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, I am happy.

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, my

neighbors

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booked 3

cakes

for

sons'

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my sons'

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parties. So, I should cook every day.

Finally

, I am going to open my market. It was my dream. I might give work for

unemployers

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unemployed

employees

. I look forward to your answer letter. Thank you very much. Yours sincerely, Xadiyabonu Sidiqova.