the chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents.
The bar chart provided depicts the amount of
time
that children
spend with their dad, mom, or both on weekdays
and weekends.
Overall
, on weekdays
, children
spend most of their time
with their mothers while
on Saturday and Sunday, they are usually accompanied by both of their parents.
On weekdays
, children
aged 0-1 spend around 9 hours
with their parents and mostly with their mothers for about 5 hours
each day. Also
, the same pattern can be seen in the 2-3 and 4-5 age groups. However
, in the 6-7 and 8-9 age groups, there is a slight increase in the time
that both father and mother devote to their children
, which is from about an hour to 2 hours
each day.
On the weekends, children
in all age groups spend the majority of their time
with their parents, about 4-5 hours
per day. However
, when it comes to the time
each parent takes care of their children
, mothers are still more than fathers on the weekend, which was 2 times more than fathers do. The same trend can also
be also
seen on weekdays
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