Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people argued that
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spoken language might be the reason for serious social
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and
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real
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when living overseas.
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,
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may cause
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for some people but others might be noticeable to a person who is not a native speaker.
This
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essay partially agrees with
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statement
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and will discuss both views. First of all, people nowadays tend to live in foreign countries more than in the past and
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including students who are studying overseas which can be seen in a capital where education is famous.
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the statement, the
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might happen in a place that does not use a common language
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as English.
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can cause social
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when we can not understand each other.
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, some serious social issues have been
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societies because some bully
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who
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other
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.
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, some Asians who are newly living and studying in another country,
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have to do part-time work along a term mostly practical experiencing these issues and being scared of foreigners.
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, the reason that
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partly agrees is because of the sympathy of humans in the present which makes a better society and country.
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, when some part-time workers have to engage with a native speaker. They might be frightened and panic
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foreigners might not be seriously worried about these
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. They may understand a condition and take pity on it.
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,
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some negative aspects can be seen in daily life,
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the great aspects
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happen several days
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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