The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph illustrates the information about the number of
visitorswho travel to a particular Caribbean island which was consumed over 7 years from 2010 to 2017. Units are measured in millions.
Overall, it can be concluded from the given information that the travelling of
visitorsstaying on cruise ships,
visitorsstaying on the island, and total
visitorsincreased the over period given. With regards to the number of total travellers increased
,it began at 1
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millionin 2015. It
thislevel in 2016 until it rocked at 3.5 in 2017.
Likewise, the volume of people who stayed on the island,
itbegan at 0.75
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millionand stood steady at the same level in 2010 and 2011. It
millionin 2013 and
thenstood constant until the end of the time surveyed except for a small dip of around 1.3
millionin 2016. The progressive patterns for
visitorson cruise ships, which started at around 0.2
million, fluctuated between around 0.2 and 0.5 from 2010 to 2013 and
thengo up sharply
millionby the end of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, million with synonyms.
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