The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The line graph illustrates the information about the number of

visitors

who travel to a particular Caribbean island which was consumed over 7 years from 2010 to 2017. Units are measured in millions.

Overall

, it can be concluded from the given information that the travelling of

visitors

staying on cruise ships,

visitors

staying on the island, and total

visitors

increased the over period given. With regards to the number of total travellers increased

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it began at 1

million

and

then

rose significantly

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around 2.8

million

in 2015. It

then

stayed at

this

level in 2016 until it rocked at 3.5 in 2017.

Likewise

, the volume of people who stayed on the island,

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began at 0.75

million

and stood steady at the same level in 2010 and 2011. It

then

grew rapidly

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1.5

million

in 2013 and

then

stood constant until the end of the time surveyed except for a small dip of around 1.3

million

in 2016. The progressive patterns for

visitors

on cruise ships, which started at around 0.2

million

, fluctuated between around 0.2 and 0.5 from 2010 to 2013 and

then

go up sharply

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2

million

by the end of the period.