In the modern era, it is easy to sell, buy and work with others through the internet. But others are against it. Do you think this is a positive trend or a negative trend?

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It is argued by a group of individuals that the internet is the most sufficient platform for exchanging goods and services

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the best way to establish relevant work with the masses,

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the rest of human beings do have not much faith in

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trend. I firmly opine that doing tasks online and electronic exchange has huge shortcomings which are unable to determine the quality of goods, lack of identification of buyers and fake and spam websites which is created made by

hackers

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with, the first point of impediment is displaying attractive products with deleterious quality.

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is because, the seller who wants to increase demand for a product can show the picture of the good in an attractive way which might distract the consumer,

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when a buyer sees the image of the product, it leads them away from the price of the given item and compelled them to spend valuable money on the thing which is not satisfied and exact as a photograph.

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, the USA revealed that the things ordered by more than 60% of customers from Amazon were totally defective and the contact number given on the website for customer care service was unanswerable.

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this

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is not the only obstacle caused by consumers, the spam and

hackers

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cannot be ignored.

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, software

hackers

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become a gigantic terrible in online transactions and work.

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is because, the

hackers

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have only motive to vanish the

account

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of the person who has a massive amount in a bank

account

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as when people try to purchase or sell something on the internet, they are required to fill in

account

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details on the website, as a

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apply

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result software

hackers

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can able to get cookies of individual

account

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from

account

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details which is a feature to transfer someone's money into another

account

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, the news headlines in ARGENTINA disclosed that the billionaire Ramesh Shukla's earnings were transferred by a master mind hacker to a private

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with the help of available data about the billionaire on social networking sites.

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although

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people have a craze to operate online sites for their convenience, the troubles caused by it

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as lack of secrecy and attractive products are undeniable.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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