The table shows the worldwide market share of mobile phone manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006.

The table shows the worldwide market share of mobile phone manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006.
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The table provides information about how many mobile phone companies were shared in the global market annually from 2005 to 2006. In general, what stands out from the graph is that Nokia was the highest mobile phone sales throughout the given period. Another interesting point is that over half of the total percentage of the personal-phone brand witnessed an increasing trend in the global market. In detail, starting at 32.5%
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in 2005, the proportion of Nokia rose slightly to 35% in the following 1 year.
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, the percentage of sales in Motorola generated
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% in the initial year, and it continued to incline gradually to 21.1% in 2006.
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, the number of Sony Ericsson saw a slight climb by 1.1% annually. Turning to other brand sales, there was a significant drop in a one-year period from just below a fifth to 16.2%.
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, Samsung experienced a slow decrease from 12.7% to 11.8%. LG saw a slow drop with just below 1%
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BenQ Mobile underwent a considerable fall by almost a half.
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