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Many people think that cooking is an important skill in life and should be taught at school. Others disagree and think it is a waste of school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Cooking is an important skill. It helps people to understand what they are eating and
also
 improve their eating habits. people enjoy cooking their own food.Some people take cooking as a time-wasting skill. But others feel that cooking should be taught at schools. I believe that cooking should not be taught at schools its a time-wasting skill. Nowadays when everything is just a phone call away, everyone can order their food easily
according to
 their preferences.
Firstly
, cooking takes a lot of hard work and time.
Also
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cooking requires
alot
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 of preparation and after cooking it takes another bunch of effort for cleaning. I believe that one should give his energy to his curriculum.
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