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Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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A lot of
individuals
 are now willing to give out their personal
information
 to technology companies to have
access
 to their applications.
This
 essay argues that it has more drawbacks than benefits because people no longer have privacy to their
data
 and it can be used against them as cyberbullying in the nearest future.
Whereas
 the only advantage is that
individuals
 have
access
 to the
information
 they need but
this
 is not strong enough because there are other software where private
data
 is not needed to
access
 them.
Firstly
, the disadvantage of
this
 is that there is no privacy for personal
data
. Once it has been shared people do not have control over it anymore.
Individuals
 who like to have very low profile online software like
this
 infringes the values of the person.
Also
,
this
 can be used against them in the nearest future because the increasing level of artificial intelligence gives room for
this
. All the
information
 provided online is mostly used to improve the responses gotten from the internet.
For example
, statistics show that 30% of the
information
 provided by the AI chatGPT at the personal
data
 of other people. Despite the disadvantages, there is a major benefit which is the individual being able to have full
access
 to the
information
 they need after providing the personal
data
.
This
 can be argued to be weak because other software does not need any private
information
 before food
access
 is given
also
 the internet is not the only place to get
information
. The library workshops at copy books
also
 give
information
 and you do not need to give your
data
. In conclusion, logical companies are now providing the opportunity for
individuals
 to give out their private
data
 before having full
access
 to an application. Box of
this
 outweighs the advantages because when the
information
 is given there is no longer privacy of
data
 and the
data
 can be used against them in the Future full stop
while
 the advantage is that giving out personal
data
 enable
individuals
 to have full
access
 to the all what is needed but
this
 can be avoided by going for other operating systems that do not need any private
information
.
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