school teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents . to what extent do agree or disagree

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instructors have greater accountability for the communal and mental growth of

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compared to their

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. Even though, I strongly agree with

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opinion,I believe that

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have a crucial

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in their offspring's breeding. At the outset,Educators have a direct effect on the mental and social status of the students because the teachers are well-trained and teach them formal lessons.

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instructors educate the

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on different kinds of subjects,

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Mathematics, Physics, and chemistry, so children’s abilities to think will grow.

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to that,teachers induce them to do and practice more than one type of exercise and practical laboratory,

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, the student’s logical thinking,reasoning abilities, and problem-solving skills will become much better.

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,

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is the best environment which encourages students to socialize and make more friends as it teaches them how to deal perfectly with each other throughout daily classroom activities.

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,their social skill will be affected directly and become much better.

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,

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can interact with each other via extracurricular activities,

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sports events, music concerts, and scouting, so the student's leadership activities, camaraderie, co-operations, and working in teamwork will increase result in a positive effect on society.

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why educators have a great effect on the cognitive and community maturing of

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. In sharp contrast to

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,

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have an important

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in the social and mental evolution of their children.First of all,

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educate them on basic ethical principles,

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, teaching them how to deal with and respect other people particularly old age .

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, they educate them on how to think in a proper way,so they will be able to differentiate between the right things that they have to do and the bad things to keep themselves away from it .Though

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we can not neglect the essential

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of

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in the breeding of their children,

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home education will not ensure a bright future

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them, so they have to send them to schools.

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, I agree that

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instructors have huge benefits on the social and mental growth of children, but I can not avoid the efficient

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of

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which is so important.