In spite of this advances made in agriculture, many people around the world stil go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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era, new developments have been made in agriculture.
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, the majority of the world's population still suffers from a lack of
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I will provide the causes of that as well potential solutions.
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with,
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large advances have occurred in the field of planting and growing crops, there are a plethora of reasons causing people
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not have basic
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. In terms of causes global warming is the main issue.
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, temperatures exponentially accelerating, there are fewer amounts of rain every year.
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, the plant's amounts are decreasing, and less
food
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is being generated. An example of that, are countries like Saudi Arabia alongside Kuwait, where, temperatures started getting to an extreme level in the past ten years,
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, the majority of their plant-based
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comes from other countries.
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, another cause of the lack of
food
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in some places of the world is the lack of innovative technologies, which can be used to improve and increase the rate of
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production. In many underdeveloped countries, traditional tools are being used in planting and farming.
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other places like Europe and the USA, advanced technologies are being used which lead to an
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increase in the production of
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. Facing
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global issue multiple strategies are needed. The main responsibility is on the government, where
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should apply strict rules, which by following these rules the amount of
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production would grow,
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global hunger would decline.
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, by increasing the salary of farmers, by doing
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action more people would be encouraged to work.
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, by providing the farmers with the support of technological machines
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new strategies, which make the job easier
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more efficient and effective.
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, modern designed greenhouses would contribute to solving the issue,
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the reason that in greenhouses plants can be grown regardless of the weather conditions outside.
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, despite the advances that have been made in agriculture, it is still not enough to limit people’s hunger.
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, the government must take rapid action and start working on potential solutions which include
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technologies.
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