The graph and chart give information on the aveage daily maximum and minimum temperature in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities
The bar chart and the line graph illustrate the statistics concerning the mean of daily extreme and minimum
degreesCelsius and the mean of
rainfalleach month in
Canberra. From the first graph, the maximum temperatures in
Canberrawere the highest in the first and
lastmonth of the
yearand the minimum temperatures were the lowest from June to August. The extreme
Brisbanepeaked at 30
degreesin January. The highest maximum
Canberrawas approximately 27
degreesduring January, February, and December. The
temperaturein In July, the least
Brisbanebottomed out at 10
degreesin continued until the end of August, in the same month the
Canberrawas approximately 2
degrees. Concerning the average number of
rainfallin these two cities. The three middle
Canberrahad the most
rainfallwhich was 10.
Brisbaneexperienced the least
monthsfrom June to August (roughly 7
Brisbane, the most
rainfallwere in February and March (14
On the other hand, the minimum
Canberrawere in the five first
monthsand the two
Overall, these two graphs have a positive correlation. During different periods of the
year, the number of
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