The graph and chart give information on the aveage daily maximum and minimum temperature in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities

The graph and chart give information on the aveage daily maximum and minimum temperature in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities
The bar chart and the line graph illustrate the statistics concerning the mean of daily extreme and minimum
temperature
in
degrees
Celsius and the mean of
days
with
rainfall
each month in
Brisbane
and
Canberra
. From the first graph, the maximum temperatures in
Brisbane
and
Canberra
were the highest in the first and
last
month of the
year
and the minimum temperatures were the lowest from June to August. The extreme
temperature
in
Brisbane
peaked at 30
degrees
in January. The highest maximum
temperature
in
Canberra
was approximately 27
degrees
during January, February, and December. The
temperature
in In July, the least
temperature
in
Brisbane
bottomed out at 10
degrees
in continued until the end of August, in the same month the
temperature
in
Canberra
was approximately 2
degrees
. Concerning the average number of
days
with
rainfall
in these two cities. The three middle
months
of the
year
in
Canberra
had the most
days
with
rainfall
which was 10.
In contrast
,
Brisbane
experienced the least
days
with
rainfall
during those
months
from June to August (roughly 7
days
). For
Brisbane
, the most
days
with
rainfall
were in February and March (14
days
).
On the other hand
, the minimum
days
with
rainfall
recorded in
Canberra
were in the five first
months
and the two
last
months
of the
year
.
Overall
, these two graphs have a positive correlation. During different periods of the
year
, the number of
days
with
rainfall
also
rises
along with
the
temperature
.
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