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Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. Do you agree or disagree?

Whether
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 is slower and not clear enough compared with human
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 is a
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recurrently
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 discussed matter. It is indubitable that machines are becoming more common in
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recent times.
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, some contend there is no plausibility of computers overthrowing people.
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 of
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 into consideration and conclude. On the one hand, the 21st century is the age of technology. A variety of inventions have surfaced during a
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 period. Take
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 the revolutionary Artificial Intelligence that arose in the early 2000s. During
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 time, the general public felt threatened by AI since it could take over any job it was programmed to do. Researchers state the
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 field suffered the most
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 of the application "Google Translate" which utilized AI in the code.
On the other hand
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, it is a frequently held consensus that human
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 is more reliable and efficient. A study conducted on the difference
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 machine and human
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 conveys that text translated by the former has less accurate results than the latter, especially with
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 languages.
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, Kazakh individuals confirmed the mechanical
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,
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many tend to opt for professionals who excel in the two necessary languages.
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 by taking everything mentioned into account, the likelihood of technology replacing human beings in specific spheres is rather unlikely. With the rate
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 which technology is developing nowadays, I believe the employment of the populace is guaranteed in the near future.

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