All large companies should provide sports facility and social gathering place for local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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responsibility

such

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public space for

citizen

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around the big enterprises to do some exercise and gather around is

debateable

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debatable

.

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some

corporation

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corporations

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choose to

giving

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money

donation

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as their preference for corporate social

responsibility

, some others believe

that is

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more effective way to provide public space for domestic people around the

corporation

. In

these

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essay

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i

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will

discuse

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discuss

why

provide

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the

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public facilities is far more effective than

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of corporate social

resposibility

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responsibility

.

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of the biggest disadvantages

corporation

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which

prefer

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to do

donation

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with

money

to do their corporate social

responsibility

that is

the lack of

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benefit for the local

society

,

due to

money

could be spent

into

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any things that

not

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necessary.

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,

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a corporation

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corporation

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only gave

money

to

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class to live their

live

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for only

few

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days. In another hand, if the

corporation

build

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some public facilities that have a lot of benefit for

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society

could give

a long term benefits

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long term benefits

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.

the

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public facilities

such

as

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a garden

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garden

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with

sport

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equipment could maintain

people

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health and social

live

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there

for

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the

corporation

will be always remembered by

the

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society

because of their role in

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society

that have a huge impact. In conclusion, every

corporation

have

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its own

prefrences

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preferences

to do

their

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corporat

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corporate

social

responsibility

which should be

impactfull

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impactful

for people in their

society

.

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could be done by Corporate being more aware of

society

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need

of

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public space and

facility

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.