Behaviour in school is getting worse. Explain the causes and the effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
These days, the
behaviour
of school-age children
is getting worse. The main reason for by is that they are not given enough attention by their parents
and teachers
. As a result
, the youngest become owners of bad behaviour
.
One of the most serious reasons for this
is that parents
spend less time with their children
. Most of the parents
are not able to provide proper education in time as a result
of working hard. In addition
, teachers
in schools are more involved with gifted and talented children
. Left-out children
feel lonely. Especially teenagers who fall into such
situations consider themselves to be an unnecessary piece of things in society. As a result
, children
start to develop various bad habits (they do not respect their parents
, they do not listen to the teacher, they do not appreciate the words of their well-behaved friends, etc.). Even when the situation is difficult, they resort to crime.
For such
things, first
of all, children
need qualified and experienced psychologists. Psychologists are masters of their work. They will certainly give all the help they can to make the children
as they were before. But their support is a bit lacking. First
of all, parents
help their offspring, and then
teachers
, friends and others also
support them.
In conclusion, to prevent children
from becoming owners of such
bad behaviour
, parents
should first
pay attention. The most important thing that parents
and teachers
give to children
is first
of all good behaviour
and a good upbringing.Submitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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