You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

this

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letter to express my annoyance when I purchased some clothes by smartphone and explored on the web but I do not have delight.

First,

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nowadays, individuals are involved in work and life

such

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as me so I do have not enough time.

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, I will go to a significant conference held in Europe, I extremely needed to suit and a shirt so three days ago, I had to look for good quality and

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I found out my suit exists on your site which was a good colour.

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, when it reached me and I put them on so a shirt fit but unfortunately, it is very tight and did not use suitable material.

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this

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colour is different to something that I will want to buy in my mind. I would be grateful if you could replace my suit because I will be having a speech at the conference

as well as

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, your company is renowned that

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trouble leads to damage to your company name. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Amirfarzam Shokoualaei

kingarrtoorThu May 25 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

188 words

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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

Some think they can use as much fresh water as they want, but others say governments should limit water use because it is not endless. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Parents of obese children should be punished for making them fat. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

he rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages.

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