IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7

In many countries plastic bags are the main source of rubbish causing pollutions in oceans and on land; therefore they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

#countries #plastic #bags #source #rubbish #pollutions #oceans #land
Nowadays, it is an increasing number of
people
 use
plastic
bags
. The more
people
 use
plastic
bags
, the more rubbish causes pollution.
Thus
,
plastic
bags
 become the main source of pollution and should be banned.
However
, I firmly agree that
plastic
bags
 should be banned for two main reasons. The main reason is harmful to marine life. Many
people
 do not think too much about the environment, they can throw their
plastic
bags
 anywhere
such
 as rivers. The plastics that float in the river can end on the sea. Animals can consume plastics and it is harmful to their bodies. For illustration, a whale died near the sea because of consuming a lot of plastics.
As a result
, the number of sea animals will decrease annually. The following reason is
people
 feel reluctant to recycle
plastic
bags
.
People
 can get
plastic
bags
 whenever they buy groceries and their needs. They tend to collect it without trying to use it for another purpose. By having too many
plastic
bags
,
people
 can throw them easily on their rubbish. For illustration,
plastic
 waste from households become the main source of pollution.
Consequently
,
plastic
bags
 will accumulate and need a very long time to decompose.
To sum up
,
plastic
bags
 become the main issue in society. It can cause many drawbacks
such
 as being harmful to the environment and marine life.
Nevertheless
,
people
 do not have the awareness to recycle their
plastic
bags
. They tend to collect or throw it into the trash.
That is
 why I am strongly convinced that
plastic
bags
 should be banned.
Submitted by misstiasclassroom on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: