In some countries, more and more adults choose to continue to live with their parents after they graduate and have found jobs. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

No doubt , it is a true fact that

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number of adults individual love to live with their

parents

after finishing their high study and having work as they want to spend more time with them .

Nonetheless

, sometimes they depend upon their guides which is very hard to ignore. From my viewpoint the merits are more than demerits and in

this

essay ,I will briefly explain it in

further

paragraphs. To commence with the benefits of

this

trend nowadays

parents

and

children

live with each other for the long term.Needless to say , it is the responsibility of their offspring to hold and take care of their elder people when they need it because

parents

also

complete all the wishes when their

children

are small ,so

that is

why in return kids

also

have to show some respect when they

parents

are old and need support from their own

children

.

For example

, in India,

children

mostly live with their

parents

due to

transitional and cultural values and it is continued for past decades. Adding more , when they both live together

then

they can easily maintain and balance their monthly expenses , they can help each other in difficult situations and stay connected with their culture .

Thus

, by ,

this

they learn how to adjust and co-operatives with each other . Despite these positive effects,there are a few negatives effect of

this

issue

such

as they depend on each .First and foremost , when

parents

live with their kids

then

children

never become self-independence and self worker .

This

is because they know they have two hands to support them from back like their mother for emotional support and their father for financial help .

Moreover

,

parents

always guide their offspring in the right direction.

As a result

,

children

depend upon spoon feeding and never try different and without

parents

.

Apart from

this

,

children

never get a chance to learn about different things

such

as how to connect with different types of people and never face failures

as well as

never did hard work in their life . In conclusion,

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the topic has good and bad effects as well ,

however

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it is worth more than the worst effect

such

as

while

living with

parents

children

get a chance to learn about culture , transitional and family importance in their life .