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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to protect animal?

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It is undeniable that more and more
species
 are becoming endangered in recent years because of human activities
such
 as deforestation, emission of carbon dioxide, and rising sea levels. In my opinion,
humans
 have a responsibility to protect
animals
 from extinction and indeed it is
also
 an urgent problem for us to solve. There are several methods that we can apply for protecting
animals
. The main reason that we should protect wildlife is the importance of biological diversity.
Although
, some people think it is not a serious problem to let some
species
 get extinct. The fact is the food chain is extremely complex and everyone connects with each other closely. Once a
species
 disappears, it will not only have an impact on the numbers of its prey and predator but
also
 all the other
species
 in the food chain will be influenced or even
humans
.
For example
, in Australia, the dingos, an endangered specie, usually eat kangaroos, but now because of the decreasing number of dingos, more and more kangaroos survive, causing a problem in planting food for
humans
.
However
, there are many ways for us to protect endangered
animals
.
First,
we can choose to use more recyclable products, which damages less our environment and gives wildlife a better place to live in.
Second,
governments can set up conservations for
animals
who
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that
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 are endangered.
For example
, a wildlife sanctuary is one kind of conservation,
provides
Correct pronoun usage
that provides
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 a more suitable and safer place for
animals
.
Third,
governments can establish laws to prevent endangered
species
 from people hunting.
This
 method will help them escape from
humans
 and draw public attention. In conclusion,
although
 we have done lots of damage to
animals
, it is not too late for us to take our first step to protect them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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