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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.
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The given chart illustrates indicators of four nations in terms of society and economy which were given by the United Nations in 1994.
Overall
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, it is evident that the indicators were significantly higher in each category for
Canada
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 and
Japan
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 than
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Peru
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in Peru
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 and
Zaire
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. The figures for each indicator in
Zaire
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 were the lowest of all the countries. In 1994, the amount of annual income per person in
Japan
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 was the highest, with 15760 USD. The figure for
Canada
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 ranked second with 11000 USD,
whereas
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 the indicators for
Peru
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 and
Zaire
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 were lower, with 160 and 130 USD respectively. The life expectancy at birth in these four countries shared a similar trend. The figures for
Japan
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 and
Canada
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 were 78 and 76 respectively.
Peru
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 and
Zaire
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 still remained lower with 51 and 47. The indicator of daily calorie supply a person in
Canada
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 ranked first with 3326, compared to that
in
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Japan
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 with 2846 at the second position. The figure for
Zaire
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 was 1749, ranked the lowest; 1927 was the indicator of daily calories in
Peru
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. Regarding adult literacy, the figures for
Canada
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 and
Japan
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 were equal at 99%,
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 there were only 68% and 34% in the rate of adult literacy in
Peru
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 and
Zaire
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, japan, peru, zaire with synonyms.
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