You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear Boby, Hi mate,

this

is Sampurna. It has been a long time since we met at Anna's party. I miss you so much. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have a plan to go to Bandung on the 16th of May 2023. For your information, my sister Winda

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will conduct a party there and luckily you have been invited too. So,I wish you can attend

this

ceremony.

Also

, if is it possible, we can use my own car to get there. And after, I want to meet your mother Mila.

Furthermore

, I want to spend in your home for 3 days. Do not worry about the fee. I will give you the money to rent your house because I am like an eager beaver now.

Besides

that, we can buy an arm and

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leg food for dinner. I can not wait for that moment. Yours Faithfully, Sampurna

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

153 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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anticipate
accommodation
arrive/depart
duration
itinerary
gracious hospitality
household
inconvenience
lodging
reimburse
temporary residence
travel arrangements
visit
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