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The pir charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pir charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
The table and the pie charts show the evolution of imported
fish
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’s
value
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 and sources in the US between 1988 and 2000.
Overall
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, the
value
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 of
fish
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 imported to the US has dramatically increased from 1988 to 2000.
Moreover
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,
it is clear that
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 the share of
fish
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 imported from Canada went down in the same period,
while
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 the exports to the US from
China
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 and other countries have risen. Looking at the information in more detail, the
value
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 of
fish
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 imported to the US went from 6.57 billion Dollars in 1988 to 8.52 in 1992. Between 1992 and 2000,
this
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 figure increased again by 2.2 billion Dollars.
Thus
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, the
value
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 of
fish
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 imported to the US has almost been multiplied by two in the 12 years period. In 1988, 60% of
fish
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 imported to the US came from Canada
whereas
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 only 13% came from
China
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 and 27% from other countries.
However
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, in 2000, Canada only represented a quarter of the US total
fish
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 imports behind
China
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 and other countries.
China
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 has more than doubled its
fish
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 exportations to the US between 1988 and 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, fish, china with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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