Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present.

Dear Mary I'm writing
letter to congrats your child's birth and I hope you and your little girl be in good health. I was so happy when I heard the news that your little angel
was born. In fact, I purchased a practical carrier
that is
suited for newborn babies
as well as
comfortable for parents to hug their baby wherever they are, like
cooking, doing chores or even
shopping. Actually, I purchased
due to
I remember
month you said you were going to buy it but you couldn't afford it at least for six months. Actually, I purchased it online, so if you don't like its colour they mentioned that I can change it. By the way, I would be willing to come and meet you and your cute prince as soon as possible If you are free the next weekend holidays. I'm waiting to let me know. best wishes, Naghmeh
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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