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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The pic depicts the percentage of the population aged 65 and over in three different countries between 1940 and 2040.
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, we can see that in the three different countries, the number of citizens aged 65 and over increases a lot from 1940 to 2040.
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, Japan have a much more powerful variation. First of all, from 1940 to 1990, Japan saw its ratio of old people fall to 4%.
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, in Sweden and the USA, the proportion of old people in their demographics rose to 14%. Obviously, the Asian country did not have the same number of people aged 65 in 1940 as the other two countries.
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, from 1990 to 2040, Japan's elderly population will rise significantly, reaching 27% in 2040. It has been the same for Sweden and the USA , but with a less powerful momentum. Both of them saw their old population increasing to more than 10% between 1990 and 2040.

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