The diagram below shows how ceramic pots are made. Write an essay for a university lecturer describing the process. training materials sequence.
The diagram portrays the
production
of ceramic pods from the raw materials in the factory
in Homeland.
Overall
, the production
of ceramic pots
consists of 12 steps, starting with the digging of clay
and finishing with the production
of pots
. Clay
is used as a raw material for the production
of ceramic pots
.
Initially
, the clay
is excavated from the ground by a huge digger and then
delivered by lorry to the factory
in Homeland. Once the clay
is entered into the factory
, it is poured into crushing machines and crushed twice. Next,
small particles of clay
are mixed with water in a tank to make a paste. Following that, the paste is moulded, and subsequently
, it is dried for 4-6 hours to evaporate water and fix itself into its final shape. These assembled ceramic pots
are placed in an oven and heated to 1000 degrees Celsius for some time. Furthermore
, they are placed inside the colour bin to be coloured. In addition
, the coloured ceramic pots
are placed into another kiln for a second time and are fringed with colour to set paint pigment in place and make them ready.
Finally
, the finished pots
are packed and stored in a warehouse of the factory
, and consequently
, the ceramic pots
are distributed to markets.Submitted by maryam.veiszadeh on
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