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The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.
#percentage #people #cinemas #european #country
The given bar chart compares the number of
people
visited
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who visited
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 to
cimenas
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cinemas
 in one particular European nation on different days
by
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in
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 three different years. In 2003, 2005 and 2007, the most number of
people
 visited the
cineams
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cinemas
cinema
 on Saturday
while
 the lowest number of
people
 visited the
cinemas
 on
Monday
. In 2005, 45% of individuals tend to
visited
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visit
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 the
cinemas
 on Saturday. between 2003 and 2007, 40% and around 42% of
people
 visited
cinemas
 on the same day. 30% of
people
 visited
cinemas
 on
Friday
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Fridays
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three
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for three
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 different years.
By contrast
, in the past,
people
 did not often
visited
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visit
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 the
cinemas
 on
Monday
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Mondays
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. 10% to below 15% of
people
 visited
cinemas
 on
Monday
. from 2003 to 2007, the figure decreased dramatically on Wednesday. More than 30% of
people
 tend to
visited
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visit
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cinemas
on
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from
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 Friday to Sunday. below than 23% of
people
 visited
cinemas
 on
Monday
 to Thursday between 2003 to 2007.
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