Informal essay: You have a friend who lives in a city abroad . You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city . Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him or her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the last few years . Ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

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Dear Rohan, Hope

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letter finds you well. It is been a long time that we met. I am writing

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letter to tell you that I am going to take admitted for my higher education in Australia. As I already completed my graduation in Engineering with good scores. So my future plan is to pursue a post-graduation degree in one of the top universities in Australia. Currently, I am working with the IBM company as a Junior Software Engineer for the past 8 months after finishing my graduation.

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, I would like to master my skills and explore new opportunities to get success in my career by getting a master's degree in

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field. I would be very thankful to you if you could assist me to list the best colleges in that country. So that I can apply for an offer letter as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing back from you.thank you in advance for your help. with regards, Geeta.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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6 paragraphs

165 words

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