The maps show Pacific Railway Station in 1998 and now

The maps show Pacific Railway Station in 1998 and now
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show Pacific Railway Station in 1998 and now
The maps convey the past and present design of
Pacific
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the Pacific
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Railway
Station
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. The
station
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has expanded and improved its facilities, and it is
also
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visible that changes occur in
the
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a
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specific period of time. In a span of 25 years, the
station
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achieved
vast
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a vast
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transformation. In 1998, there were only two train platforms.
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, there was only one shop built inside at the lower part of the
station
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and the toilet was far from the other establishments. As time passes by, the
station
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has already three platform trains, an expanded ticket office, two additional shops and a newly-built restaurant.
Supermarket
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The supermarket
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is
also
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available in the well-improved
station
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.
However
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, the toilets at the
center
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centre
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of the past railway were demolished. The café on the
south east
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southeast
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side of the map remained and has no changes.
To conclude
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, the Pacific Railway
Station
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is a lot more developed than before. It became more
functionable
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functional
, organized and helpful to people.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words station with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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