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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays,it's becoming more popular among humans that idea ,which many professionals ,like doctors and ,Engineers should be called for
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 in the
country
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 where they were born and burst up ,
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, some individuals believe that if they want to
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 in a foreign
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 they should be free to
work
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 with, these days,more and more
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 believe that some experts should be required in the
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 where they did their training since it can help
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 to feel comfortable in their
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,they can live with their family or parents without any challenges and it is
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 more convenient for living.
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,
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 who
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 in their
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 can attitude with
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 easily,
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 they can talk in their national language.
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,wages there might not be enough for their conditions,
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 income might be high in other nations.
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 to
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, some believe that if someone wants to
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 in another
country
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 they should be free to
work
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,payments in some foreign
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 extremely high, which can attract some humans and
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 is why some
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 want to labour in other nations.
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, the environment there is remarkably superb for living and
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 it's beneficial to upgrade their skills.
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, indeed some citizens should be required to
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 where they did their training, but I think if someone wants to
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 in another
country
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 they should be independent.What I mean is that
people
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 have their right way of choosing, so they should
work
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 in the
country
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 where they wish .
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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