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Countries are becoming more and more similliar because are able to by the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#countries #similliar #products #world #development
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In today's culture___,disputes are in plentiful supply.
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accurate in
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 increasing demand on these days.The question of whether or not
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(have)has become a concern in our current ethos.Even though most people would agree that
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 few deny that
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preferring
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 is increasing. On the one hand, there is
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,l agree with the viewpoint that
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. The very first step would be to
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.People should __to alleviate the situation.That,l feel,would significantly improve the situation.
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, we will focus
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 briefly,all things considered,it is my opinion ___has many
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significant
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