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Writing task 1Writing task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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Due to
 increasing demand on these days__.The question of whether or not __have(has) become a concern in our current culture.Even though most people would agree that __few deny that___.People are increasingly
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preferring
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This
 raises the question of whether the__1 is useful or not .
According to
 recent studies,the number of persons using the_1) is increasing. On the one hand, there is
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 argument that
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.One of the primary reasons for
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This
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.Another cause may be __. One of the elements that
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 is
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,l agree with the viewpoint that
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. The very first step would be to
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.People should __to alleviate the situation.That,l feel,would significantly improve the situation.
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 briefly,all things considered,it is my opinion ___has many
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this
 issue deserves more attention as it has
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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