Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, people are more likely to choose immobile
habit
, in spite of the growing number of gyms. Fix the agreement mistake
habits
This
may lead several
issues which I will discuss below Change preposition
to several
coupled with
my opined solutions.
First of all, problems
led by this
lifestyle
can be
obviously be seen in Unnecessary verb
apply
health
problems
such
as obesity and heart diseases
. Being Fix the agreement mistake
disease
a
sedentary means you have Change the article
apply
lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
physicial
activities so that it would lead to the minimum consumption of our energy. If it happens to our body, the energy will be altered to be body fats affecting Correct your spelling
physical
to
our weight Change preposition
apply
increasement
. Correct your spelling
increment
Secondly
, mental health
problem
will Fix the agreement mistake
problems
also
be considered as an issue associated with sedentary
Add an article
a sedentary
lifestyle
. Sitting in their place, their happiness would be decreased because they only produced less endorpine
or Correct your spelling
endorphin
endorphins
oxcitocine
hormones related to happiness. Correct your spelling
oxytocin
This
will influence mental health
illness
like having stress Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
due to
inbalance
Correct article usage
an inbalance
lifestyle
as overwhelming works
. Fix the agreement mistake
work
Coupled with
the exessive
use of Correct your spelling
excessive
internet
or social media Add an article
the internet
due to
the sedentary life, it will also
increase the mental health
problems
potential.
Turning to possible solutions, I suggest cangging
the Correct your spelling
changing
hanging
habit
will be the best way. We have to make exercise as
our new Change preposition
apply
habit
. We can take our time in the morning for doing physicial
activities Correct your spelling
physical
such
as walking along
our house and Change preposition
around
do
jogging. Making an exciting ambience to do Unnecessary verb
apply
such
a new habit
will also
helpful
to increase our motivation. As experienced by my family, we created a Replace the word
help
Change the noun form
sports
sport
culture by walking together every morning and trying to motivate each other. Change the verb form
sporting
Also
, we can decrease our engagement with online social media with
creating Change preposition
by
off-line
communities which able to encourage us to have Correct your spelling
offline
physicial
Correct your spelling
physical
stimulations
. Fix the agreement mistake
stimulation
For example
, community outdoor who have similar hobbies with us or sport
-related communities. As can be seen in Indonesia's public figure
, they have been Fix the agreement mistake
figures
giving
a role model to do some Wrong verb form
given
sport
Fix the agreement mistake
sports
activies
. They gave instances to did some Correct your spelling
activities
sport
competitions like Fix the agreement mistake
sports
doing
tennis Unnecessary verb
apply
sport
and football.
To sum up
, many problems
have been posited resulted
Replace the word
result
of
Change preposition
from
sedentary
Add an article
a sedentary
lifestyle
. Accordingly
, the best alternative to overcome this
Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
problems
is by changing lifestyle
to be more friendly with exercising, Correct pronoun usage
your lifestyle
doing
Correct word choice
and doing
pysicial activites untill
having communities which can support sports Correct your spelling
physical activities until
in particular
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